I too, slug,
am a stranger...
slow day
Rita Odeh, April 2014 Shiki Kukai, 10th place
(1,2,2) = 9 pts
∞
awakened...
eleven stars still bowing
down to me
Rita Odeh, April 2014 Shiki Kukai
(0,1,0) = 2 pts
my haiku alludes to the biblical story of Joseph's dream
Lovely Haiku...Please come back and write more.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Milanie, for your lovely feedback. I will keep posting my published haiku here. If you would like to read more of my haiku, you can get a copy of: Buds of Dream, which will be available at amazon.com soon.
ReplyDeleteMoving as the snail; accepting my lethargy; this listless night's SKY
ReplyDelete__If my opinion counts, each thought endorses any readers' further thought. _m
Your opinion, Magyar, counts to me. Thanks!
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