I like the contrast of strife and calmness in your haiku ~ Good one ~
"creep" is really eloquent in this context. Well done.
Makes me think of the Civil War places I have visited.
You have captured a fragment of history in these lines. Please can I ask you to provide a link back to Real Toads, as the source of the prompt you have used for this piece.
Ohhh, beautiful. Such a contrast here. Gorgeous. de whimsygizmo.wordpress.com
This could fit so many different countries...nature trying to survive war. Beautiful haiku
I like the contrast of strife and calmness in your haiku ~ Good one ~
ReplyDelete"creep" is really eloquent in this context. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMakes me think of the Civil War places I have visited.
ReplyDeleteYou have captured a fragment of history in these lines.
ReplyDeletePlease can I ask you to provide a link back to Real Toads, as the source of the prompt you have used for this piece.
Ohhh, beautiful. Such a contrast here. Gorgeous.
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This could fit so many different countries...nature trying to survive war. Beautiful haiku
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