As a stand-alone, this builds powerfully to the last line. And the visual image contributes something more.
I am glad you liked it, Bill. Comments help me improve my next haiga. Thanks for being so supportive!
As a stand-alone, this builds powerfully to the last line. And the visual image contributes something more.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you liked it, Bill. Comments help me improve my next haiga. Thanks for being so supportive!
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