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Friday, January 31, 2014

Haiku Prompt4





pilgrim's chant-
slowly, the lotus unfold
their petals







the mountain...
resonating the chant
of pilgrims



Carpe Diem #389, Ryozenji

9 comments:

  1. There is deep reverence in both your haiku. A deeper layer. I see that a prayer is answered in the unfolding of the lotus petals through the pilgrim's chant. The second haiku, the layer that I read is that the whole universe reflects back to us our prayers, whether good or bad.

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  2. Very spiritual Rita ... that second is such a strong one ... chapeau!

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  3. A pilgrim's chants can be leisurely matching the slow unfurling. How very true! Nicely Rita!

    Hank

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  4. These catch the mystery of the relation between the human and the natural

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  5. Wow!
    Every word written here is a dewdrop that wets the petals of my haiku dream.
    Big thank you...

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  6. These are beautiful & spiritual, Rita. Thank you for stopping by my blog :)

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