There is deep reverence in both your haiku. A deeper layer. I see that a prayer is answered in the unfolding of the lotus petals through the pilgrim's chant. The second haiku, the layer that I read is that the whole universe reflects back to us our prayers, whether good or bad.
Very spiritual Rita ... that second is such a strong one ... chapeau!
A pilgrim's chants can be leisurely matching the slow unfurling. How very true! Nicely Rita!Hank
These catch the mystery of the relation between the human and the natural
Great haiku... love them
Wow! Every word written here is a dewdrop that wets the petals of my haiku dream.Big thank you...
These are beautiful & spiritual, Rita. Thank you for stopping by my blog :)
Thanks for revisiting, Lordana.
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