I sent my Rictameter to, my best friend and coeditor of the International Kukai(Haiku Contest), John Daleiden to edit the syllables.
He was inspired and sent me three such poems.
Since he doesn't have a blog, I decided to surprise him and post two of his poems here:
or just leave . . .
but please don’t just tease me
with a come hither sexy look
or that long one minute passionate kiss
leaving me panting so breathless,
roused and charged for pursuit
yet fully doomed
is a short walk
in a dark and dense woods
where I can hear the call of birds
and see last year’s autumn leaves decaying
on a forest floor rich
with wildflower blooms