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Tuesday, July 3, 2012

My Haiku on the 3rd IKK




5th Place:

bright rainbow—
the train comes out
of the tunnel

Rita Odeh,IL
0,2,4=8




6th Place:

drawing a black
and white rainbow...
the lonely child

Rita Odeh, IL
0,2,2=6




10th Place:

hospital window—
after a long night,
the rainbow

Rita Odeh,IL
0,0,2=2




13 comments:

  1. Lovely metaphors for rainbows, with each haiku creating a different emotion and image. The second one is especially striking. Congrats on making 5th, 6th, and 10th place! :)

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  2. Hi Loredana. It is not easy to reach a good place in a contest where there are 150 haiku and the voters have just 6 points. I am satisfiyed with the places I reach.
    I enjoy reading your critical comment which reflects a creative soul behind it. Thanks:))

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  3. Difficile d'avoir une bonne traduction,
    j'aime beaucoup celui de l'hôpital

    Très amicalement

    jeanpierreaudren.blogspot.fr

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    1. Difficult to have a good translation, I really like that of the hospital

      very friendly

      jeanpierreaudren.blogspot.fr

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    2. hospital window—
      after a long night,
      the rainbow

      Hi Yanis. Yes, I too think that this haiku is suggestive. But, voters have 150 haiku and 6 points. It is not easy to attract their attention to vote for a certain haiku.
      Thanks for your visit and remarkable evaluation.

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  4. Congratulations!
    The lonely child haiku is my favourite!

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    1. Me too. I consider it an evocative haiku.
      Thanks for your visit, Angelika.
      I am so glad to meet you after a long period of my absence.

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  5. The second one is amazing Rita!....Sadly beautiful!

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    1. I am glad to know that this one is your favourite. You add more points to this haiku which reached only the 6th place in the contest.

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  6. I truely favor... the rainbow morning; after the long hospital night's wait, there is that sense of hope. _m

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    1. Glad to know which one is your favorite. It helps me to evaluate my writings.
      Thanks.

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  7. Hi Rita. I received your message. But I worried for my post. It takes yet a long time and that per email. Bu you say that´s normal. I hope so that it will come to you.
    Mu lovely greet and a big hug.

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  8. Hi dearest friend. Please don't worry . I am sure that any mail from abroad will take one month till we get it.
    Wish to know your opinion of this set of haiku since you are a talented lady.

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