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Rita Odeh
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Rita Odeh
Tuesday, July 3, 2012
My Haiku on the 3rd IKK
5th Place:
bright rainbow—
the train comes out
of the tunnel
Rita Odeh,IL
0,2,4=8
6th Place:
drawing a black
and white rainbow...
the lonely child
Rita Odeh, IL
0,2,2=6
10th Place:
hospital window—
after a long night,
the rainbow
Rita Odeh,IL
0,0,2=2
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Hi Loredana. It is not easy to reach a good place in a contest where there are 150 haiku and the voters have just 6 points. I am satisfiyed with the places I reach.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy reading your critical comment which reflects a creative soul behind it. Thanks:))
Difficile d'avoir une bonne traduction,
ReplyDeletej'aime beaucoup celui de l'hôpital
Très amicalement
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Difficult to have a good translation, I really like that of the hospital
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hospital window—
Deleteafter a long night,
the rainbow
Hi Yanis. Yes, I too think that this haiku is suggestive. But, voters have 150 haiku and 6 points. It is not easy to attract their attention to vote for a certain haiku.
Thanks for your visit and remarkable evaluation.
Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteThe lonely child haiku is my favourite!
Me too. I consider it an evocative haiku.
DeleteThanks for your visit, Angelika.
I am so glad to meet you after a long period of my absence.
The second one is amazing Rita!....Sadly beautiful!
ReplyDeleteI am glad to know that this one is your favourite. You add more points to this haiku which reached only the 6th place in the contest.
DeleteI truely favor... the rainbow morning; after the long hospital night's wait, there is that sense of hope. _m
ReplyDeleteGlad to know which one is your favorite. It helps me to evaluate my writings.
DeleteThanks.
Hi Rita. I received your message. But I worried for my post. It takes yet a long time and that per email. Bu you say that´s normal. I hope so that it will come to you.
ReplyDeleteMu lovely greet and a big hug.
Hi dearest friend. Please don't worry . I am sure that any mail from abroad will take one month till we get it.
ReplyDeleteWish to know your opinion of this set of haiku since you are a talented lady.