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Saturday, June 23, 2012

Short Poem







I wish
you stay a dream
so that I won't lose you.
But, I don't know why
whenever I see two in love
I do miss you !



Prompt: Mistake
Poetry Jam

10 comments:

  1. Lots of layers in this poem ... yearning for love, fear of loss ... sometimes through mistakes in love, there is a lesson to be learned. Nice poem :)

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    1. I enjoyed reading your comment,Lorena. A good poet is a good critic,too.thanks:))

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  2. I like this, the image and the words!!

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    1. And I like your visit and precious comment.thanks:))

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  3. Short poem; so much depth! I hear the sadness. Thank you for joining Poetry Jam!

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    1. I am honored to join poetry jam. Thanks for this precious comment:))

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    .........★MaRiBeL★

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    1. Such a stunning way of expressing love which is the core of my humble short poem.thanks:))

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  5. Wow, the regret in this poem is so tangible. Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing this at Poetry Jam.

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    1. Your opinion added colors to my writing dream,Mary.

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