I like this, the image and the words!!
And I like your visit and precious comment.thanks:))
Short poem; so much depth! I hear the sadness. Thank you for joining Poetry Jam!
I am honored to join poetry jam. Thanks for this precious comment:))
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Such a stunning way of expressing love which is the core of my humble short poem.thanks:))
Wow, the regret in this poem is so tangible. Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing this at Poetry Jam.
Your opinion added colors to my writing dream,Mary.
I enjoyed reading your comment,Lorena. A good poet is a good critic,too.thanks:))
I like this, the image and the words!!
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DeleteShort poem; so much depth! I hear the sadness. Thank you for joining Poetry Jam!
ReplyDeleteI am honored to join poetry jam. Thanks for this precious comment:))
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Such a stunning way of expressing love which is the core of my humble short poem.thanks:))
DeleteWow, the regret in this poem is so tangible. Very nicely done! Thanks for sharing this at Poetry Jam.
ReplyDeleteYour opinion added colors to my writing dream,Mary.
DeleteI enjoyed reading your comment,Lorena. A good poet is a good critic,too.thanks:))
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