Me too:))although you add a different layer to this poem which implies that observing the day moon makes the observer hear an inner sound about life, nature, happiness...wisdom. Being attentive to nature is the first step of writing haiku. That's why I am addicted to haiku. Nature talks. But, most people are too much involved in the material aspect of life, so they loose this voice of wisdom. When I observed this day moon and caught a shot of it, It told me that life is stunning and I need to relax and enjoy it and never worry about anything.
I do touch the the spirit of poetry in everything you write, Jaideep. Do you mean the quote:(Beware butterflies, you are caught in a dream)? I wrote this for my visitors whom I see as butterflies caught in my dream of poetry and escpecially haiku which I got addicted to and i try to pass it over to my new friends.
I would be delighted to hear what the day moon hears!
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Me too:))although you add a different layer to this poem which implies that observing the day moon makes the observer hear an inner sound about life, nature, happiness...wisdom.
DeleteBeing attentive to nature is the first step of writing haiku. That's why I am addicted to haiku.
Nature talks. But, most people are too much involved in the material aspect of life, so they loose this voice of wisdom.
When I observed this day moon and caught a shot of it, It told me that life is stunning and I need to relax and enjoy it and never worry about anything.
Lovely 'haiga' and insightful 'haiku' ~thanks, ^_^ (A Creative Harbor)
ReplyDeleteYour opinion added colors to my dream of haiku:))
ReplyDeleteNice shot :) indeed sometimes nature makes us realize how rushed we are and we need to slow down to enjoy the view :)
ReplyDeletelovely haiku :)
Lovely comment, too. Thanks for the visit:))
Deletewhen the moon is seen in daytime, I feel the magic...now I know just what it's doing......wonderful and lovely haiga
ReplyDeleteI like the zen principle of: attention, acceptance and responsibility.
DeleteThanks for your upliftingvisit,Joanne:))
Beautiful haiga ~ Nice to meet you at HH ~
ReplyDeleteThe pleasure is mine, Grace:))
ReplyDeleteOnly poets can show us daymoon and bring happiness :), love the quote in the title of your blog :)
ReplyDeleteI do touch the the spirit of poetry in everything you write, Jaideep.
ReplyDeleteDo you mean the quote:(Beware butterflies, you are caught in a dream)?
I wrote this for my visitors whom I see as butterflies
caught in my dream of poetry and escpecially haiku which I got addicted to and i try to pass it over to my new friends.
This is very beautiful haiku....Lovely thoughts on day moon :)
ReplyDeleteLovely comment:))
DeleteThanks.
such an artistic take Rita.... you got a new fan!
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Thanks Tarun.
DeleteAfter visiting your blog, I may say that you, too, got a new fan.
I am honoured by your visit, Loredana.
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