.. but if i had to choose, i think i like this haiga the best for this haiku.(did i get it right?) i find this more up close n personal,"close", both litteral n not. but i would politely ask of you to not remove any of them., but maybe instead link them to eatch other?
Hello Drend. I am most thankful to you for taking the time to tell me your opinion. Ok, I won't remove the first one but will post it in this box.
3 comments belong to the first haiga which I decided to move here: drendMar 18, 2012 05:26 PMi think the visual image of this is really pretty. thank you for sharing!:DRita OdehMar 18, 2012 09:04 PMHello Drend. I am delighted that you liked it. There is another haiga with the same haiku. Have a look at it, please. If possible, I would like to know which of the two is better because I will remove one of them.drendMar 19, 2012 05:28 AMtough choice!:s do you really have to remove one of 'em? D: i think they give off diffrent "air"., and thus are likewise alluring,n beautiful.