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Thursday, March 22, 2012

Haiga: "Abandoned House"







deepening dusk
the abandoned house surrounded
by wild flowers..


OR:

surrounded
by wild flowers..
the left house


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March21, 2012


2 comments:

  1. Typo alert: That's "abandoned."

    I want to push you for one more line

    the abandoned house
    surrounded by wild flowers
    . . . . . . ?

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    1. the abandoned house
      surrounded by wild flowers..
      deepening dusk

      ~

      Let's ask everybody to suggest the third line.
      I tried mine.

      ~

      Thanks for the alert. Sometimes, I get so exhausted but cannot stop making haiga because I am FOND of this artwork.
      Well, I know that there is a supportive angel who cares.Thanks..!

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